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Too Many Cocks?


Is it possible to have too many cocks? Apparently so. And for anyone wondering why - I've been editing.

I know I have a bad habit of using my favourite words and phrases repeatedly. In some cases it's not a major problem - I can change "look" to "glance", interchange moans and groans, and that's fine. Sometimes it's tougher. I had no idea how often I use the word "as", and it's not an easy word to find synonyms for.

And then we have the sex scenes.

I should add at this point that there was only one actual cock involved in this particular scene. It just happened to be mentioned several times. Unfortunately there are only so many words you can use for "cock" before it starts to sound silly. "Dick" is fine. "Prick" is an insult. "Willy" sounds like I'm back in primary school. I've got away with "shaft" and "length" before, but "hardness" only works through trousers, in my experience. And I really don't want to end up with "bobbing male cylinder".

I just hope my muse never comes up with an all-male threesome, or foursome, or more. Having that many cocks on a page would make my editorial head explode.

How does everyone get round this without resorting to purple prose or cutesy nicknames?

27 comments:

Lisabet Sarai said...

Hi, Tanith,

For one thing,, you don't have to specifically mention or describe his organ. I also use "penis" occasionally - I know that sounds clinical to some people, but I don't mind.

Anyway, if you think you have problems - try writing M/M!

Tanith Davenport said...

That's what worries me! It's bad enough trying to manage personal pronouns without extra genitals as well...

Ranae Rose said...

Well, have you tried 'fleshy spear', or perhaps 'engorged manhood'? LOL Just kidding. Funny post. :)

Tanith Davenport said...

Ranae, I love those! :)

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